Comments on Draft Magazine 1

From the various comments of people from my target audience, I can summarise from this that the colour scheme was mostly a feature of the magazine that people liked. However, the layout of the magazine cover and contents was disliked as it should look more professional and more target audience oriented through having a better structure. When it comes to the background of the contents page in relation to the layout, this was also disliked as it did not look attractive. With the images of my magazine cover and contents page, they were thought to be good images to use but the width of them should be considered as it made some of them, especially the front cover image, look squashed. Finally, when it came to the other features of the magazine, these were liked also. Examples being a good masthead and the inclusion of a competition being liked.